Do you like my story so far?

Oh dear. One, the chapters are way too short. Two, please stop using caps, even though you're showing how excited your characters are, there's usually no use for them. Three, there's too much punctuation, the ...... are too frequent. Four, I understand how you're trying to do a POV but I'm gaining nothing from the ramblings of the character. Five, I think that they got into a play, there's an annoying girl named Gabby and the character seems to be obnoxious but still aloof which sort of contradicts itself. Try some character development first before you throw them into a story.